All Comments on 'Jerry Gets His Chance'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good story

I really liked this story and I look forward to a sequel(s).

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
sequel

Good story, everbody likes to see lifes losers get one over on the surfer dudes.Hard to follow up though, as you've got a love story now.If jerry takes his chances, he will be the bad guy.Love to see how you do this.

andy

RoammeRoammeover 15 years ago
Loved it

I loved the plot. I would have liked more to understand how they switched like that. Very nice story overall.

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