All Comments on 'Jerry's Obsession'

So.... what's the point of an erotic story ending with "What I did with Jerry that night is also special, and nobody's business but my own. The End."? It was very well-written right up to that point. But to end an erotic story like that without any kind of sex taking place? What a waste of time.

The title says it all, really. Well-written as far as it went but, as the previous comment said, a let-down.

It was great up to the ending. Like the comments before me, you were doing a great job and had me sucked in, no pun intended, and then just fizzled! Hope that isn't how the blow job went. Maybe so if you can't tell about it.

It is a very realistic story with no mind shattering orgasms etc which makes it authentic.

The like minded bi-curious would love to know the details, but the mounting uncertainty is very arousing in itself.

Your story is well written and edited with good grammar, spelling and punctuation.