All Comments on 'Jess'

by clarissaj1982

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ReefBeachReefBeachalmost 8 years ago
Some nice touches

You let "a man" find out what a woman likes, & I like that; but the sex for the man was a bit mechanical. Fun ti read, though.

maddictmaddictalmost 8 years ago
Nope you didn't.

It felt like Jessica and another woman about to make love. You are just to sweet and polite. For instance if you want to pull something off pull on this baby. That's enough of that crap.

A wonderful story of its own and I want to read more. Nice try. I'm not sure were this comment is/was headed so I'll end it here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Intellectually Stimulating: (Woman writing from Male POV) - Is seemed like a woman’s fantasy —- of how much this young man desperately wants her. She makes him confess his desire for her several times and promise to meet her father (her inner soap opera) before she can sleep with him. Ha! …As she teases him (endlessly) with her seduction the whole way. Love it!

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