by Turbidus
I am totally absorbed in this tale. I hope the kids stay together though.
The group fantasy with the couple on the beach was a turn off. Either his stomach clenches at the thought of Jess with another man or it doesn't... I know which one I prefer.
Somehow, sisters who want to make love with their brothers AND have sex with other guys seem less devoted than one might hope....
Nice story, with family drama, and some real chances of some becoming slightly better versions of themselves...
... nice hook.