All Comments on 'Jess was a Bitch Ch. 14'

another fantastic read. now the suspense is killing me.

Wow, a great chapter. It filled in Jon's persona nicely and led to a better understanding of he and Jess as well as the others involved without the "stroker" aspect. I really enjoyed it and look forward to the next chapter, although I have an ominous feeling pertaining to the last paragraph and hope I'm wrong. Thank you for your work.

I can't wait for the next Chapter as this story holds your attention.

Dude, cut back on the dude,dude.

Wow! Wow!! Wow!!! This story is beyond any 30 chapter mainstream story I have read recently! Please keep writing.

Swingers!

Emotionally stunted people that always need more until it kills their own relationship.

Statistics, worldwide do not lie, the vast majority of married couples who swing end up divorcing within a few years of commencing to swing. These stories never deal with the emotional baggage that accompanies swinging couples. No fun in that.

As l said before, all these couples are lMHO doomed in the long. Especially Mom and Dads.

In some ways l’ve come to believe that Caitlin and Travis are predators who take and do not give.

They are amongst the worst in this story, although they and not the siblings are the core of this tale.

3/5