All Comments on 'Jessica'

I was really hoping for more story content. You started off well but then it trails off to nothing. Complete a follow up chapter and really explain how they became romantic.

Good read. Thanks for sharing.

What happens when he dies? Why didn't he get her back into school? Get her GED? Get her trained to do something with her life instead of being a slave. She wasn't a slave to start her life, she had only been a slave for a few years, so why couldn't she be trained to live free? Stupid story of a selfish man and the abused woman he takes advantage of. And why didn't he do something to fuck up the first masters life?

You can't change her, idiot. That is the way that she was made: to be subservient to a master. This life gives her the most pleasure. Her present master should give her away to some deserving person (like me 😌) when he dies as part of his will.

Not sure where the to and is in this!

As a story it was finished too soon. There is a lot to be explained and explored between the end of page 1 & page two!

Certainly would have liked to see the arsewipe 'master' get his arse kicked!!

I gave you five stars because it’s well written, as far as it goes. I second the opinion that you apparently just ran out of interest or ideas. Something between pages 1&2 is warranted, but probably too late now.

Tc