by odingirl
A lovely story.
I enjoyed it very much.
Please don't let be your only story.
The action was decent but pretty short. Try fleshing out the meat of the story, and perhaps more foreplay.
I loved the story... I love the way you wrote it also. So much like my style of writing! Love it... Write more stories with Jessica Alba, please!
You definitely need to write more stories with Jessica Alba, she is so HOT.