All Comments on 'Jessica Alba & Me'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Lovely Story

A lovely story.

I enjoyed it very much.

Please don't let be your only story.

Hank123456789Hank123456789almost 18 years ago
Okay

The action was decent but pretty short. Try fleshing out the meat of the story, and perhaps more foreplay.

KKILOEPPSKKILOEPPSalmost 18 years ago
I too am in love with Jessica Alba!

I loved the story... I love the way you wrote it also. So much like my style of writing! Love it... Write more stories with Jessica Alba, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
More

You definitely need to write more stories with Jessica Alba, she is so HOT.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

fuck you ass

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