All Comments on 'Jessica Obsessed Over Her Teacher'

You had a couple of "Jennifer" when you needed "Jessica". I liked the spanking scene for punishment because that is what teachers do right, please continue.

love the details!

Great story, thank you!

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Nice story

Thank you for a great story, could you follow it up with chapter 2 please ? I interested to know what happened next thank you again for a great story.

Please write more this is a good story you've got on your hands jump tidy up the grammar a little more next time.

I get the feeling English isn't your native language, so some of the odd phrasing is understandable, but you need to pick a viewpoint. Either write as first person, or third person. Switching back and forth makes this much harder to read and enjoy.

Really good story and a very promising start - I look forward to more

This is s beautiful story, I like the way Natalie rescued Jessica from goodness knows what might have happened to her. I really hope they live happy ever after

This was a great story line, but the grammatical errors and spelling mistakes killed it. You have such potential. Find an editor and keep writing :)

Loved your story and agree that there are several writing errors, but the overall story really wasn't harmed. Liked the build up but you should have had Jessica confess to Natalie how much she adored her and have her ask to meet again. The story needs to continue with more heated sex between Jessica and Natalie with Natalie beginning to dominate Jessica over time. Jessica, as you described, seems to be a bit submissive, so you can have this fact brought out by Natalie's skilled actions. Also, you could have Jessica seduce her roommate into a hot, lesbian affair right at home.

Very nice story that requires many more chapters. Also, write other stories as you do have talent.

Really liked the way that you put these two together. It was totally unexpected how they were in the bar and how Jessica found out that Natalie was there too

I especially liked the way that you described how her dress rode up higher and her panties were visable getting the place mats out of the cupboardI

I was hoping that when she sat down on the sofa wearing a t'shirt that she wasn't wearing any panties but she was.

Had a visual of how sexy she looked wearing the t'shirt anyway I was hoping that Natalie was going to see Jessica's cunt peeking out from under the t'shirt

I liked the way that you left it because there's a lot of different ways to keep it going between these two girls.

Looking forward to hearing some more about what happens