All Comments on 'Jessica the Lonely'

Nothing more beautiful than a pregnant woman who keeps herself looking nice...

Really touching and very sexy.

Desire, passion, compassion, all the makings of a great series. Keep it up!

Desire, passion, compassion, all the makings of a great series. Keep it up!

didnt mean to put that on there twice.

Now that is brotherly love. Write more of it

Keep up this track of Storytelling please

I really loved your brother/sister incest tale. It was actually a beautiful little story of real love. I think you could really do a nice sequel, should you ever be inclined to do so. Thanks for a fine story.

i have felt that love and it is the most wonderful i have ever had. My brother has helped me through a lot of emotional problems and is as understanding as your story.

Loved it. No mention was made regarding the size of body parts either.

this could have been a good story IF the writer had continued it. this needs several more chapters to tell how she teaches him to please a woman. we also need to know what happens when the mother gets home and after the baby is born. as is this is only a third or less of the story and a waste of time part of a story is worse than no story at all.

Poor guy I would sorry for him, he has a sister who hasn't had her itch scratched in awhile, can you say viagra cause he'll need some when he makes up for all those nights she went without

More. Let him suckin on the tits next time

Loved it, thanks for writing!

Hope you get this since its been awhile since you've written.

I really love a love story,

Thank You for shareing

What a wonderful reminder of the special love siblings can share. My older sister was my first as well and while she was not pregnant, she too had returned home to lick her wounds of rejection. Our loving relationship carried on for over six years and ended when she became pregnant by another man. Some of my most loving, erotic memories are those of my sister!

When I was pregnant with my first of 4 I did a similar thing with my brother.

What a well written piece of erotica this story is. So passionate. So sexy. So true to life.

The 2nd to the last paragraph ruined the whole story. He's a "toy" now, bitch.

sweet. LOL no more "quickies". more lotion for a big belly