All Comments on 'Jessica's Change Management Ch. 20'

by Cathartico

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Epic tale ...

...still going strong with fresh ideas. New version of the degrading competition concept.

Thanks and keep up the good word

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Really Like where the story is going !

I just simply LOVED the battle between Consultant-Jessica and Bimbo-Jessica !!! It is so fun to read how she is so confused on how to act given the humiliating situations. Given the fact that she already sees that Consultant-her does not bring her joy, I do hope that Bimbo-her wins her mental battle. And by winning, I mean winning by a mile ! Making her realize that she is losing everything her life was built on ( her Career, her pride, dignity, even her intelligence ) would push her into embracing her Bimbo-self !!

As I suspect she is going to lose her job, it would be awesome if she could really start her career as a stripper. The Bimbo-her would just stupidly accept it.

And to push her more deeply into her bimbofication, it would be awesome if she would also lose her car, her home...making her so dependent on Ortega !

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Regarding the next chapter.

So I think I speak for a good number readers here. This story line has been fantastic, however I think it might be time for a return to your roots. Please please please can the next chapter have some hardcore...sexual.....abuse of the cheap, cuntish bits of rape whore fuck meat. I'm talking spitting, tied up, or tied down gangbanging. slapping, punching, whipping. Double anal, face fucking chokefest. Forced humiliation or even go down the torture root. MAKE THOSE BITCHES SUFFER!!!!!

Many thanks again, for your continued writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Lol

A very forthright comment, but I do agree. We do need to hear some hardcore abusive sex dealt out to Jessica. Hopefully somemore lingerie and BDSM themed stuff.

ronnymueronnymueover 5 years ago
More

PLease continue the story. And add some more rough and abusive elements. Make the bimbo work.

toxicmasktoxicmaskover 5 years ago
Finally

Finally I could catch up with this story. I'm really hoping it turns to the dark side with Jessica ending up as a low-class stripper in a random sleazy stripclub or a cheap streetwalker in some street corner, without any possessions or even decent clothes, not enjoying her fate anymore but keeping her beauty.

I love your pace and your detailed descriptions for each scene.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hire a better editor

Your stories are filled with lengthy unnecessary garbage, keep it short and on the point.

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