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All Comments on 'Jessica's Fantasy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Way too short

Not enough to get into it

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Not bad

Can't wait for part two

clippymustdieclippymustdieover 8 years ago
very good ,

For your first story, not bad at all.

You definitely have my attention.

Looking forward to part 2,3,...

Thanks. v

availableslave2uavailableslave2uover 8 years ago
Nice beginning

Nice build up. Can't wait to see the next installment.

AndrewmsailingAndrewmsailingabout 8 years ago
A great start

But disappointingly brief. I would have preferred this to continue. I'm not in favour of cliff-hangers in this genre. All of that aside, you write well and excitingly. Please continue.

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