All Comments on 'Jessica's Interview'

You wondered if you have "it" or don't have "it" as a writer.

You've got it.

Keep writing.

You have a sexy way with this.

But I didn't like the arrogance of the boss and cannot believe that even if flustered that anyone would just drop clothes in front of a total stranger especially not one who made multiple insinuations that he trains women to be sexual servants.

In short you write well but I didn't like the content of this story.

I would give your ability to write a 4 but my enjoyment of the tale a 2.

I wish there were two scales by which to score a story on here.

In the sake of fairness I'll give it a 4.

Ignore that other review. I LOVE your sexy arrogant Boss. I want the job he's offering and I want more of your story. Please continue and soon!

Solid story telling. I also find the boss an unlikable git, not a masterful dominant. Resorting to that kind of trickery is a weakness, to my thinking. It seems more likely Jessica would run or breakdown under this planned manipulation, not respond with the (rather trite) this is what I need acceptance. However, the story has a sound base and you have a strong way of telling it. It would be a good thing to continue. If you do, make them real people with imperfections and mixed emotions. Make them both work for anything that happens. Long lists of activities that magically turn her into a perfect sub would get boring.

A good beginning; however, I caution you to be very careful and not create one-dimensional characters. Don't let her become a cliche.

Your story whilst highly unlikely fires the imagination and you should continue. As a submissive I love the conflicting emotions of what is wrong but most definitely right for me. Yes the other comments have raised the issues of one dimensional characters but the opportunity to explore and challenge the societal norms within sane and consensual erotica have so many paths. Ps if you are single and resemble the male lead I would love to chat further

I really enjoyed this and can't wait for the rest!

Love the start please keep this story going! I for one am loving the total arrogance of the boss.