All Comments on 'Jessica's Secret Diary'

In fact, saying that this story was very good is like saying Mt. Everest is pretty high. It would have been nice to know more about what was in the diary. Why was Abi distressed with what she read at the end of the diary? How often did the sisters switch husbands and did the husbands ever figure it out? There was a lot going on in the story that suggests a follow-up is warranted. Thanks for a really good first effort.

you left way to much out it felt way to rushed no way abi would get over being mad so fast and no way would he be ok with what they read in the diary and what his aunt,abi and mom wanted from him so fast this should have been played out over months not days do a rewrite and slow it down also like noted below you never said what abi was upset about reading in the diary and they never finished reading it it leaves us feeling cheated because you left so much out

Ok story, but what got me is i was expecting a cousin thing, and lost all interest once you brought the mother into the picture.

I expected just what happened, just not quite so quickly. The father, when Jack took him to the airport, set the ground work for what would happen. Please continue the story line, for some reason I expect the "cousins" to wind up being 1/2 brother/sister instead. Lots of possibilities....

There is much more to tell. You just teased us with Abi and Jessica, do they go farther? What happens when Jask's dad comes back? Please continue the story.

Great story...

There is so much more to tell... revisit this please..

Next chapter please

Awesome well written story. Loved every sentence, but WOW what a cock tease. Like a really good book series that is not finished you end with everything wide to explode into a wild lusty party and now I can't wait for the next story, but don't know if you are even gonna follow this one up. Please do.

no real begining and we are left hanging with out a proper end. adding the mothers ruined the story it should have been just the kids. this needs atleast one or two more chapters maybe they can transfer to the same college and live together. maybe they could find out they are siblings not cousins maybe they could get married. half a story is worse than no story at all.

I agree very well written, I hope you consider writing more chapters? The Children need to be brought together as well as the Mother's, & possibly an all out orgy?

There are so many things left hanging. A little back story on all members of the family would be helpful. As others mention that the cousins should have been the center of the story. I just assume that they got together in a later chapter in a much longer book. I felt that things seemed a little more rushed than necessary. Again I think you tried to put too much in too small a space. Now, all that being said I still gave you five stars. I felt the story was well written and made the basic points you wanted. It was erotic enough. The action was well detailed. I enjoyed the story. Keep on writing. You are a real talent.

You know how to tell a good story and so far this is the second of yours I have read and I'm going to read many more.

My mother caught me fucking my first cousin when I was 12 and she was 15 and threatened to tell my dad but nothing happened, nothing more was said. We had been doing it for about a year before that but after we only did it off and on for a few months.

I really enjoyed this story and the build-up. However, I'm disappointed with the ending. You should continue this story and Jack should continue his "exploration" of his family. I hope you do continue to develope and expand on this story.

was a good story till the end , spoilt by fucking thev shitholes

but it seems this author's least favorite sex is fucking pussy. It's a shame!

People who don't like any kind of sex but Plain Vanilla, shouldn't be reading stories on Literotica.

please don't stop this here!

two more women to fuck yet.

This has been my most favourite of your stories so far I would love to read more of this one for sure.

Harding is ur name and what happens to my dick reading ur story. Lots of Harding. Let’s let poor Abi get her share..

surely there is more to this hot sexy tale. He and Abi have not fucked yet and she wanted him to be her first. I am sure Jess will want him too. so much more fun to be enjoyed to stop here.

A wonderful story. It is now late 2017 and I would love to see a sequel. Focusing on

Abi and his relationship for the rest of the two weeks and then skip to the present with the mother, her sister and Abi.

I loved this story.

MrHotnSpicey

She wanted to be first and all she got was her tits kissed and a few moments foreplay. Hopefully he made up for it the following few days, but she was probably always going to hold it over him that he did everyone else in the house first.

I said it before and I'll say it again. Your becoming a premature ejaculator of a great story teller. This was such a great build up. Then, just as it was getting good... POP the end!!! I got all wound up drawn into the story, trying to figure out how it was all going to play out and the it was just over. That sucks, That truly Sucks!

Does he need any help, two weeks is a long time!