by Kat73
Loved reading this story. You should continue to write more chapters to this story.
I'm a total sucker for a happy ending... loved this story. Thanks.
This is one of the best stories I've read lately. Keep writing.
"Add" is the mathematical function.
"Ad" is the abbreviation of advertisement. One D
Loved this story it is a great beginning. Please write another chapter to this story asap.
I loved reading this story & I hope that you will write another chapter to it soon. It is a very good story.
I havent read my Lesbian stories, but this one is really an eyeopener and I am your fan now. Wish to see more from you Kat
I read this one at work and had to stay at my desk until my erection subsided
Great premise - the accidental connection. You did a nice job of slipping into it, even though we knew it was coming. Good flow, good character development, and it was believable. As much as I write sex into stories, I still feel like it has to have a valid reason to be there - you accomplished that.
And, you got it hot - nice sizzle.
Awesome story. Never been with a woman, however, I imagine it sometimes being like this.
Such a wonderful story of intimacy. It was so easy to get close to both Julie and Jessie and really feel what they were going through together. I'm so glad you have done a sequel as I'm not nearly ready to let either of them go. Such wonderful descriptions and pacing that moved this whole piece toward such a sweet ending. Absolutely a great read. Thank you so much! - Litfan10
Very hot, Kat. Here is what I like best: "...now I found myself being the aggressor. I would touch her hair, cheek, butt, hips every chance I got. She was like a drug and I couldn't get enough..."
Very entertaining. The story flew by all to quickly. I look forward to the other items on the menu.
Very hot. I'm sure that many readers will be "getting off" with this one.
read many such stories , but one is very good hats off to kate73 . keep it up
I read your story with anticipation the whole way through. Very arousing, yet realistic.
Well done! Found your list of stories in the signature of your post in the Anonymous Secrets discussion thread. I can see I'll be busy reading the sequel along with your other stories for a while tonight.
I tend to draw things out further in the build up phases but this felt pretty natural. It was certainly very enjoyable to read.
Very well written. A bit contrived, but I enjoyed it and will now go and read the next chapter.
its not often I have time to read, but Boy your a good Writer- mhhhhhhh
Very expertly written Kat. Full of passion and desire and the women's viewpoint!
You had me at hello. I love the way Julie evolved and awakened in this experience. Some of my favorite writers here are women who write these experiences and fantasies. Thank you. I hope you write another episode.
Jay Richards
Now other then a few quick sentences didn't they just roll over and go to sleep when they were done, exactly like they were complaining about men doing?