All Comments on 'Jessie & The Tornado Ch. 05'

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story so I'll be looking out for anything else you post in Lit.

Thank you so much.

excellent story loved every bit of it. Looking forward to reading more works from you

Well done Marine! Thank you for your service both to our country and to the readers here at Literotica. Semper Fi

It made me laugh so much; the interaction between Jessie and Sam was sublime in my opinion. It had laughs and tears (I did cry) - you did a brilliant job.

Jessica and Sam not only feel like real people, they feel like friends to me. I'm happy for them. That's an achievement, Old Sarge.

I loved reading this complete story. It just took me in, and I couldn't let go until I finished it... The characters are great, the story is amazing... And I like the humor a lot.

However, I do think you tried to 'end' it too much in this final chapter. While I strongly dislike unfinished stories, it seems you went overboard on the other side here. It feels to me like you tried to end everything, close every possible story angle. To me, personally, it feels a bit forced. You can end a story, and leave the readers with a good feeling, without closing down every possible thread of the story. I hope you understand what I mean, English isn't my native language. And I do hope you see this as constructive criticism.

Anyway loved it! Thanks for writing and sharing it here!

This is a fantastically written story. I just loved the witty banter between the main characters and the wonderful way you portrayed two people trying desperately to recover from such traumatic events and get on with their lives. Very well done indeed.

Great story, I give it a four point oooh!

Thank you for taking the time to write and post this very nice story.

Great story and want to thank you for sharing it.

Funny, little but romantic and loving sex, and well written.

Thank you!

I tend only to read the romances - and of all I have read, this is the best I've ever read. I don't know if you've considered writing professionally, Sarge, but if you have not, you should. You have a gift, my friend. You were able to maintain this all the way to the end- seldom do I see that.

Consider it a compliment if you wish, but consider sharing your gifts with a wider section of the world as well.

Semper Fi.

Thoroughly enjoyed the story. Great character and relationship development between Sam and Debbie and then Sam and Jessie. A wonderful heart touching story. Keep up the good work.

One word for the entire series.

SPEECHLESS.

This is definite movie material. Totally enjoyable. Thank you!! Not bad for a jar head.

“I can imagine no more rewarding a career. And any man who may be asked in this century what he did to make his life worthwhile, I think can respond with a good deal of pride and satisfaction: 'I served in the United States Navy.” ― John F. Kennedy

ICC (SS/SW) USN (Ret)

PS: Thank you for a wonderful story

The same formula as most of the stories on Lit, the male Protagonist is wealthy and has a large cock. A shame you didn't have the courage for the context to be more realistic - - since 95% of all males have a penis of 6" or less. And, certainly the same percentage of them don't have a $ 4 Million plus net worth. If written in a more realistic background, like say "Average Joe", this would've been a classic.

Yet another great,well written sequel....... Loved it.

Thanks for sharing.

Niestar.

Great storytelling. As a vet I also like the military back story. For me no need to apologize for the length

or, slow to evolve sex. You should be proud of your professional storytelling and the sensitive real addition of the intimate part of the story. I look forward to your next effort.

An Oldie but a Goldie! Many Thanks ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!

there is no such thing as an ex Marine. had an uncle that was a Marine . I have read most all of old sarge's stories & this is 1 of the best

My uncle would kick your ass, you get the spirit right. However according to my uncle and all of his badass poker playing pals, there are two kinds of marines, active duty, and retired. No ex nothing else.

on interstate 75 in Georgia between Warner Robins & Atlanta is known as tornado alley .

You can always tell a Marine - just can't tell them much...

USN-FTGC doing lots of NGFS off Nam, many a Marine's best friend, putting 5" rounds dead on target fast - just spot me then give the command "VT frag 20 rounds fire for affect"....

get to feeling down about my late wife in her passing to soon . read Jessi & the tornado get a pick me up every time . when are we getting something new old Sarge ????????

This story really rings home for me because of several similarities between the main character and myself.

I was never a Marine but I was in the Navy and after 9-11, the National Guard. I ended up doing 3 tours in Iraq and a shortened one in Afghan were I was injured in a very nasty firefight. It was an ambush and we were heavily outnumbered and none of us would have survived if not for the intervention of a Heavenly Angel........ aka ......... The A-10 Warthog and it's GE Mini-Gun.

I also hold 2 degrees, one in Anthropology (a fluke when I found out I only needed 10 more credits to get it), and my original degree in History.

Georgia is my future home after an early retirement in a few years.

There are many more things but suffice it to say, I really liked this series.

Great writing! I’ve never commented on a story on this site before but had to take a moment and tell you how much I enjoyed it!

My rating is for the entire story.

Only a Marine NCO could come up with something as fun twisted and torturing as this and only if they had been there. Marines do hundreds of things that will astound people and earn them baskets of awards and feel honored if they get one.

Very funny and a joy to read.

A TrueType great story. One of the best I have read on Literotia. I have read all 3 of your stories and have to say that this is your best; well written, believable, with great structure and grammar.

My only criticism is that twice you used the last name of Baxter instead of Walker. Great job.