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estragonestragonover 13 years ago
Good story

Good writing. To the previous poster: don't confuse the character's comment with the author's point of view. The character doesn't always speak with the author's voice. And clearly this character has a lot to learn in many ways.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Another good 4star story

Loved it, I wonder how often, if ever, this happens.

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