All Comments on 'Jijaji Transformed Into a Girl'

Why is it that stories involving characters from India are so poorly written?

Please write more.. this is not a English lesson, it is a story with meaning

If English was your second language, you might have some problems too: grammar, spelling, colloquial expressions, cultural differences. I had fewer problems reading this than some stories written by Americans (or Brits) who can't spell and haven't learned proper grammar.