All Comments on 'Jill and Jack'

as dumb as the Road Show stories.

A waste of 5 minutes if you ask me. Hey tawriter! This is not erotic Continuous rutting by idiot characters does not make a story erotic Badger was right This makes the roas show look like Shakespeare 1*

Maybe the author would get the hint that he can't write (and likely can't walk and breathe at the same time).

If any three of TAWriter's neurons ever fire at the same time? Can anyone explain exactly how this porno shop operates at ANY function described? (I DO -at least in theory-understand how the DP works!).

I read ch 2 first. I wish I never read either.

After trying to read this, I wonder how this author remembers to breathe. It really was that bad.