All Comments on 'Jill and the Bad Boy Ch. 02'

I enjoy reading this story today. I love the way the story is written.

- Kath

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You made Jill to be weak and unable to resist cheating on her husband. Noone acts like that, we all choose our actions.

It would be better if she were honest, she doesnt WANT to be faithful to her husband. Also, when it cones to sex, she cant have great sex with Danny and lame sex with her husband and still respect her husband. It wont take long before she starts to cut her husband off and then how long before she starts to emotionally distance herself?

you do an excellent job of characterizing them as unintelligent, unethical, selfish, shallow, and helpless sex objects for a predator to enjoy, then throw away. Yeah, you really really respect women.

it is still going nowhere, yes she is a complete slut, yes she will fuck any and all cocks

that is established now get on with the story (what little there is)

I liked chapter two more than chapter one. Will there be a chapter three? Hope so.

Sorry, worthless slut cheating is not erotic, this story is not well written, I will skip the rest.

Why does this fool care so much about degrading these stories? I’ll mommy didn’t breast feed him.

I could picture myself under this gorgeous man as he pounded me senseless. Great descriptive sex scenes. I’ll admit it, I had two finger working my kitty over as I read this. My husband always says I can have any man I want as long as he knows. I wish I had a Danny move next door to me. Sigh

Oh yeah, to the fool who posts all the negative b.s. on these stories: You are an embarrassment to men.

".....this is written for a special reader and it is intended to cater to her fantasy..." if that crap is for one special reader why then publishing that crap at literotica and not send it to the "special reader" private??

A man rams the head of his dick into a woman's cervix and you need to scrape her off the ceiling from the pain. This story seems like it would fit in the BDSM category better than here in Loving Wives. Add to that the fact that they're both unlikable characters and you end up with a story that's simply no fun to read.

1 star

They begin early! And then, she's feeling "as she usually did when naked for the first time with a man"? This wife has been around the block -- or next door -- that often? It's remarkable that her feelings (and your prose) remain so intense! But they are, so onward!

I loved it. Dont listen to the haters. Would love some more danger with the husband nearby, total submission without him knowing. Make the husband unknowingly clean her up or kiss her cum filled mouth

Just another common crap story by a crap author.

I am sbrooks103's sister. Leave him alone you whining bitches! He has 239 accounts to keep up with and he can't read every piece of shut story posted.

Good sex but a ridiculous premise and two dimensional characters with no redeeming features who do not engender empathy with the reader and remain genuinely unlikable throughout.

Please just try to humor him. We have worked long and hard to try to get him back to normal from the trauma of being raped by his dog. Sadly, the dog left him for a poodle and now he has abandonment issues as well. Part of his therapy is to talk it out, but he choos s to write all of these negative comments under anonymous or one of his many profiles. Speaking of which, we will be addressing his multiple personalities at a later session.

Fuck the bad comments keep writing more about jill and danny.

I hope at some point it will be aaron placing dannys dick in her pussy with his own hands.

I love it. You capture her feelings and her temptations. Danny’s attitude makes it hot. I am eager to see how he will push her limits just to see how far he can get her to go for him.

Please add to the story soon!

1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

Thanks for posting!

A guy like this ruined our marriage and my ex-wife, beware.

When I skim through a story such as this, it just reminds me of how petulant and small-minded and immature. So many of these, so-called Woke and empowered women are in our American society nowadays. Hey, ladies, are You mature and sentient beings, Or are you little selfish children who have to always grasp for the next shiny object that catches your attention? I M recently Retired at sixty one years young, And during all of my years Of international Travel I was approached and hit on by many women, And guess what, I never crossed the line and cheated on my marriage. Because I was and currently am a mature sentient adult. It really doesn't take much energy to just say no!