All Comments on 'Jill Marshall from Next Door'

"But he undressed, sat on the edge of the paper covered table waiting patiently "

A few paragraphs later -

"Jimmie was wondering what happened to the one named Debra, but he said nothing, and dropped his slacks and underwear "

When did he put his 'slacks and underwear' back on??

Well, anon? Things like this happen when we finish a story started two years ago.

But sorry, I will give you your money back.

MGM

If only the world was like that, but some one is bound to report them.... and if they do not rope in the mayor and the chief of police they will all be burned in a public plaza.

Damn that was a good one Thanks for sharing.

Nazis killed people, proof reading doesn't kill stories.

Sometimes what you think is bad is really good.