All Comments on 'Jilted Kerri Saunders'

I always try to read the stories by EG because you never know what you will find. Some are excellent, some are less so, but normally they are clever and well thought out.

This one was very good, though certainly not his best. It was very clever.

trogted

but i found myself kinda confussed at times! is there going to be another chapter because i really didn't like how the story ended. all in all though, i thought it was a fairly good story! just expected more since i see you as such a talented writer!!

I loved the story , as usual , but found the name swapping a trifle annoying, Cass suddenly becoming "she" and Kerries words being attributed to Cass, I would like to volunteer as a proof reader if required , no charge.