by dragonwriter
Please find a way to continue the story it is full of potential.I love it.
Let’s have missy and Jim do a few positions from the Kama sutra book next chapter!!!!!!!!!!
hopefully everett never wakes up. just don't fuck up Jimmy! he's our guy - and he's great. Mitch and Leslie makes me a little nervous........
You need to take care of Everett. Wife beaters and rapists need a grisly end.
I wonder how many pain pills are required to make that house a much safer place to live in peace again?
Just re-reading this one again. Marvellous characters, great dialogue, super writing.
Now, stop basking in the glory of my praise and finish the next one!
I really hope Jim's summer doesn't come to an end too soon. I'd really hate for his to end before ours does.
I love the series so far but please don't leave us hanging! It's going on almost 4 months since you published chapter 6. Any thoughts as to when chapter 7 will be coming out?
The whole series was great and held my attention. Good story
although it ended too abruptly. Hopefully you are in the process of writing more chapters.
As some others have stated, I have enjoyed your story and really wish that you would seriously consider continuing it. It is a very abrupt and odd end to the story. There is so much more it seems that could be written.
5 ***** and more if they would allow us to vote.
It has some real life situations.
there really are some men and women with that type of excellent luck and some with horrible shit luck.
Only in fiction can someone find so many mature, rational, logical, and open-minded people. Of course, as in real life, you do find some sub humans; however, in fiction they are easily disposed of. This has truly been a good series. The author has taken the time to develop the characters and logically open and close subplots.