by Magicwrtr
i love Jim sees Dead People and i hope to read more of the story of Jim soon!
great work, really interesting story, hope Jim gets some of those vampire or devil girls tooo!!!!!!!!!
Ok i dont know if the writer checks the comments or not. I think its stupid for jim to say "vampires are real?" Comon its written clearly in chapter 1 that he could feel demons, ghosts and VAMPIRES.
Anyway nice story.
Jim is growing too quickly. Developing his powers too much, too early.
Yesterday he was figuring out how to channel his power to vanquish a magical demonic entity, and now he's healing broken bones and shooting physical laser beams??
"pour some sugar on me" is a proper noun, the title of a song. As such, it should be initial caps, as in:
'Pour Some Sugar on Me'.
GeoD