All Comments on 'Jimmy Makes Suzy 'His' Ch. 04'

thats it? what about the new girl

I didn't mark the 5 stars for each story. I was too eager to read tthe next one

Ah to be jimmy. Very good character developement and story flow. You can continue with this even more since the door/ doors were left open. Too bad about Lou, tho. Maybe he'll get the next one. There is some much more story to be told here, if you'd care to continue.

GP

I love this series but when will there be more of it? It's got a nice flow. Great written series.

But i agree with the others there should be more Does Judith stay or move on Does he father other children for the other women brought into his and Suzy's life. Do either of his sister's become aware of their brother and mother's expanded relationship. 5 *s

this was a fun story to read

but my question is what happen to Suzy, his little girl,Judith and linda

it needs a ending

Great stories - hope more are on their way

David

I just read all 4 chapters and found them good my only quibble is with Jimmy. Had he been more assertive, the driving force rather than Suzy, then the story would be more than just good - it would be superb.

I agree with the earlier comment jimmy seems like kinda a wimp being led around. He definitely would be a better character if he was way more assertive.

You write a fun story. Enjoyed it. Thanks

I would have thought that the lack of interest tin sex by Jimmy's father would have been a point of medical inquiry, as he is not really very old.

Thoroughly enjoyed the story. It is a shame that you can ony find emotionally mature, self-assured, self-confident and open minded individuals in fiction.