All Comments on 'Jim's Legacy Pt. 3 Ariel 01'

Honestly, your stories are well written and sexy as hell. I feel as though I am Ariel and going through the power envy that she is. I have read all your stories in Jim's Universe and wow, look forward to your next installment. Or your next storyline creation.

Few grammar and homophone mistakes. Also the present tense in narration in some paragraphs was jarring.

The plot development itself is good. Keep on!