All Comments on 'Jim's Legacy Pt. 3 - Ariel 03'

Enjoyed reading all of these:) and glad someone finished a series that they started and not stoping halfway

Thanks for sharing the adventure with us. I enjoyed it.

Awesome story!

I found your stories by accident searching for something else.

During the reading of the original series I was tempted to say 'work on filling out the stories' or 'to short and choppy' but you have done that on your own and well done I might add.

As time permits or writers block insists, I will make my way through your other stories.

Keep up the good work and thanks for finishing your series, nothing worse than a good story left hanging.

ienjoyed your stories but would have liked

more action but i am a reader not a writer and i am glad your a writer.

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I am re reading your older stories while waiting for new ones and I love it! Great to see how your writing evolved and perfected throughout this series. Waiting for more awesome stories!

Great series. Really enjoyed the tie to the original story line.