All Comments on 'JJ and Ashley Ch. 08'

thank you for continuing this story. Its been many months and we still read this story and we were worried you had quit it.

We love JJ and Ashley.

JJ handle your business hon - deal with Veronica and stop ignoring her! Don't fkuc around and procrastinate! I know you told her before but I think you need to reinforce it. Do a face-to-face, Skype, call, something but have a serious honest talk with her. Also, communicate with Ashley and let her know when this is done. You don't need ms. Veronica fkucing up your magic with Ashley (who is a fantastic woman btw)..but you already know that so just take my advice and handle your shits. You deserve a beautiful and happy life and it is right within reach :).

Anyway DarkFang, Great chapter! your writing is so rich it's always a pleasure to read. I am sooooo happy you continued the story because I really love reading about JJ and Ashley!! Oh and the sex scene - smoking as usual!!! Thank you for this new chapter (pass my advice on to JJ) and looking forward to more.

I love the story of JJ and Ashley. I think this might be one of the best series on this site if not the best, in my opinion. Thank you DF.

So glad you continued this! Can't wait for more!!!!

I was pleasantly surprised to see you posted a new chapter. Thank you! It was fantastic!

there was just the right amount of sex in this part, I liked reading the part where they went camping, it was good to read all the girls getting along so good instead of just jumping into one big orgy whenever they got drunk, I thought it was a good change of pace can't wait to read more

I liked the pace, and the scenery, and the sexual tension.

Great chapter.

Thanks a huge lot for investing the time and effort and talent.

Damn girl, just as I was starting to panic that there will be no more sweet JJ & Ashie you post this gem, filled with just the right amount of sexy time, well deserved relaxation and actual character growth that demands some tinkering. The camping experience was a nice touch to the overall story, even though they had to hold back on the hanky panky in that crowded tent.

Of course I gave you a 5*, just hope that the next chapter follows a bit sooner!

So a good story! Thank you!

Happy JJ & Ashleigh are back. Love these two women. Veronica is gonna stir up a shitstorm, I can smell it in the air. Keep writing DarkFang. Thanks for giving us this little piece of wonderful.

I don't know how you do it, DF. It's like JJ and Ashley live and breathe. Thanks again for giving us lovers who are so incredibly human and real. I some glad they're back. Keep it coming, DF

I was eating my lunch when I went onto this site and nearly choked on my apple in excitement when I saw you posted another chapter. I've always loved your work. Another amazing story of JJ and Ashley.

Thanks for sharing your writing with this community. Excellent chapter!

Their story is so amazing, and your writing is excellent. Perfectly paced, no mistakes, and precisely executed to give us just enough information to keep us coming back for more! Please keep up the job well done!

Thanks for sharing your wonderful work. I can't wait to see the next chapter either here or on wattpad.

It's getting so that each chapter ending leaves the reader wanting more. I particularly liked the tete-a-tete between JJ and Debbie. It's the kind of conversation that makes you feel that perhaps humanity isn't so bad after all. And do I detect sinister undercurrents that will involve Veronica?

Just wish that JJ would stop smoking, but then perhaps her tough life entitles her to.

Please write the next chapter i just loooooovvvvvee this story!!!!!!

Please continue this story, it's one of the best I've read on here.

Thanks for sharing!

It's been a few months so PLEASE give us the next chapter!!!

I've a craving for your stories!!!

And I'm jones-ing for more JJ and Ashley.

But due to the plot of the storyline, I can only give it 5 stars. Sorry about that. You're just gonna have to keep trying with this...

Hallo DarkFang!

Beautifully written as always, very sexy, and hot as hell,,, yes! ... Jackie said it's a lot better than the paperbacks, she and her girlfriends passed around in college, and says you might look into the possibility of having "JJ and Ashley" published under erotic lesbian love stories?

Thank-you, (5-Stars and 5-Hot Lesbian Orgasms!),,, yes! 😘

Your kinky dyke friend,

Gay Kat.

Thats it ..... Smile