All Comments on 'JJ and the Party'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Thanks for the story

I really enjoyed the story.

It needed a proof read, but still a good read. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Like it very much: 🌟🌟🌟🌟+ (4.4/5 = 88%)!

Scenario 5*****

Internal dialogue 5*****

However something was missing to give you an overall 5 stars! Probably i was not able to relate to some aspects of the story because @ the time you were born, i was 35, & so much has changed since then.

:-)

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