by razor_nut
I loved the story. A huge JLH fan. Good plot that allowed you to get to the sex quickly & adding the 2 best things about her, her tits & ass was great. A shame you haven't done anything for over a year & a half.
You might want to revise your story, there's some confusion where you write it in 1st & 2nd person.
"John leaned forward and gently flicked my tongue over the lips of her pussy" quote from your story (I copy & pasted it)