All Comments on 'Joanna vs. Mr. Smith'

This story is an unlikely possibility that assumes the worst of humanity. It is a repugnant concept, and doesn't seem particularly - or at all - erotic. Congratulations. You've created something that is abhorrent to at last one person.

It is often true that our most erotic and primitive fetishes are by definition going to be repugnant to some subset of humanity. Thank you for expressing that this story moved you. Not your fetish. I get it.

sick trash! this got my first ever "1" ; too bad lit. doesn't have a zero.

I can't believe I read it all the way through and cannot add any positive words to describe it. No joy...

Thanks lowkeyone. I can't believe I wrote it all the way through!

It's a terrible, degenerate tale. Maybe I should have posted a trigger warning.

This story was actually enough to get me to break my vow to never comment on this website, whoever you are, you should write a book, this was literally the most accurate thing I've ever read on this website, thank you.

Did you post this as a reality story in comparssion to the Ugly Red Head fantasy Story?

Very astute, Anonymous. Although neither story is real (obviously), the two stories are indeed intended to represent the two extremes of possibility for this particular fantasy.

I do agree that Joanna vs Mr. Smith is definitely more realistic, if horrific.

Seems like a troll fic, good thing I skipped ahead

I guess the rapist got what he deserved, though I’m not sure things necessarily worked out great for the student...