by YANKEE DAN
Your story was not bad. But glaring spelling mistakes made it difficult to continue for me. To effectively write a good story one must know how to write possesives, the difference between to, too and two.
Just editorial stuff. Other than that, this was pretty hot!
im a bi-sexual woman, married to a closet cd. I love making 'her' up, and makin' love in fancy gowns. i am inspired to write stories for her, like i havn't done in many years. i will use this site to get me started again. thanks for the inspration. I will be sure to check my grammar, and spelling before i submit it. hopfully, ur readers will enjoy my stories, as much as my husband(i mean wife) does. I may have 'her' post my stories on her hotmail, or yahoo sites, since we do use both domains. In fact, i will demand, that he post it on msn spaces. sincerly, MassageLady94
Loved the twists and the sex! Got me so wet.
xoxo,
Di
I would love to live your dreams. Jobe needs to be content with his two newfound women. They are everything a sissy could want. Keep this story going
4yourpleasureiam any one want to use me like this please PM me
This really makes me wonder who reads these stories and accepts them for Liteortica?
This wasn't worth the time I took, trying to read it
I love this story! Yeah, there are a lot of typos which kind of make it rough to read, but the self-aware smartass of a narrator is just so much fun to follow around.