All Comments on 'Jocks of the South Pt. 04'

Matt vs. Francis please! Good job so far!

And I'm glad I did because I'm the type that needs to know how the story looks several chapters later and I'm happy with who Nick continues a relationship with..so far (:

Glad he's back in the picture!

Hmmm looks like Francis likes him now. Wonder what will happen if he finds out about Matt. Can't wait for the next part and the return of Matt. I still like matt better

Francis is falling in love with Nick tbh

I like Matt but I'm really rooting for Francis. He's rough around the edges and delving into this whole new thing with Nick. I think Matt proves to be a great obstacle they can get over. I think this could really be a great beginning of a tumultuous love story for Francis and Nick.

Soon both Matt and Nick will be at school in California, and Francis will be far, far away! Besides, it seems like Francis would be just as happy with any available Sheep. His kind of brute sex doesn't actually require a person, just a receptacle.

oh no he shouldnt had sex with matt

I was for matt BC he treated Nick much better, but he may have the advantage of distance from small town ideas at university to allow himself be who he is. And maturity to know how to treat someone in general... Francis has to work on both. I was pleasantly surprised to see he treated Nick much better by reciprocating and wanting to spend more time with him and get to know him... Wow lol. I hope he does BC Nick's feelings do seen to be leaning toward Francis. I do think he needs to start getting smart and being safe if he wants to live through college. I am kinda pulling for him and Francis though with him planning to go away it may not be feasible even if Francis has some awakening. I like Marty and hope to set him have an effect on his brother and maybe be open e with him and show him it's OK. Maybe they can all have some fun together

Matt is good fuck but like too read more of Francis and Nick and their love story

I hope that Nick ends up with Francis

I want Francis with Nick.💗💗💗

i like both matt and francis but like one of the commenters said, matt is only here for a little while. sure nick says he is going to california but he could go to the a&m college like dustin if he really starts to fall for francis. i think nick can help francis open up more. people only like matt because he is already comfortable with himself, and this is because he spent time in a place like california where being gay is more accepted. i think once francis opens up, he'll be even nicer and sweeter than nick. we already see him developing some feelings but matt didn't say anything like that just yet. some people might also like matt better because they think he's hotter, but i think francis and nick are meant for each other <3

Damn, you have me flipping on which character I prefer. Matt or Francis? This chapter obviously made me lean more towards Francis. Your writing is really incredible. Give us more! :D

The way you write Francis makes him very unappealing as a person. But you said this story is about lust (at least for now), so I'd say you're successful. The aspect I find fascinating about Francis is that when he gets horny, eff the consequences. That's how he wound up with no female willing to date him. Makes me wonder if he'll be a thoughtless ho his whole life.

i dont get what that geemeedee person is saying, I like francis and if you read the comments, a lot of other people like him too. i think he'll become nicer though as he begins to get close to nick and maybe he'll change into a 'better' person. i cant wait to read more and see what else will happen

I want Matt and Nick together. Matt is secure in his own skin and he treats Nick with care.

I'm happy Francis seems to be changing but what will happen when he finds out about his brother? I don't think his reaction will be a good one for Nick.

Wow, thanks everyone for the support and for your feedback on the story! I also really appreciate your thoughts on who Nick should choose to be with. Although I don't want to spoil anything, we'll get to see some tensions rising in the next chapter. Perhaps by then more of you will have changed your minds or chosen your favourite character! To be quite honest, I'm a bit torn myself. Thanks again for your support and I plan to write more stuff for all of you, and hopefully I will have improved my style by then! I'm still adjusting to this particular genre and to characters of this nature.

Cheers!

~Scott

Love this story keep them up very good

How about Matt and Francis both bone Nick together?

First of all: Love, love, LOVE this series - it's so freakin' hot!

A small piece of advice though: Maybe research Rugby a little or stick to what you know (I'm guessing football?). I'll give you credit for "enjoying" rugby players as much as I do - it shows you have excellent taste:) However, when you confuse touchdowns for tries, talk about rounds, bending over the ball etc., it kind of takes away some of the credibility of the story and that's a shame, because it really is such a great story!

Having said that though, I hope we'll hear a lot more about Nick and those yummy brothers:)

omg, I'm so sorry about that! what actually happened was that I wrote the whole story with the sport being football but at the last minute, I changed it rugby for some reason? I literally just found and replaced the word football to rugby, which means that all the touchdowns and stuff like that remained behind, oops. But next time, i'll think twice before changing something last minute without reading over the whole story again. Thanks for the advice!

~Scott

Ah fuck man. This gotta be the hottest fuck so far. I really love it whenever Nick calls Francis daddy. And holy shit, the dirty talks and the fantastic description of how desperate they are for each other. I was really horny dude. Great job.

Can’t say much more than I love it really do