All Comments on 'Jocks of the South Pt. 12B'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hot, Hot, Hot !!!!!

You sure can write steamy, satisfying, pulsing, throbbing SEX !!!

scottgoulding123scottgoulding123almost 7 years agoAuthor
Author's Note

I am still writing Jocks of the South! Chapter 13 is getting posted in about a week and I’m currently working on the last chapter, Part 14. Again, I’m sorry for the huge delay but I was taking a bit of a break from writing in order to focus on school, and uploading also got difficult for me once exams rolled around. It takes a lot longer to upload on Literotica, and I always submit to a different site first (the process to upload is easier and they post a lot quicker, I also have a bigger following on there) so for those of you invested in the series, you can follow me on my blog (scottsgaystories.tumblr.com) for updates on my progress, new stories/series and timely notifications for when a new story is posted. You can also send me messages on there so everyone’s questions are answered at once, since most people have the same questions and answering dozens of emails can be really difficult for me. Some bonus chapters are available on the blog that aren’t uploaded elsewhere.

Thank you to all my wonderful readers and supporters. I hope you’ve enjoyed this chapter and will like the next one too. I’m also working on a new series, taking into account all the feedback given to me by readers and using the experience I’ve gained over the last two years or so (most of Jocks of the South was written in 2015). I’ve written the first bit of it and I can already feel that it will be better and more polished than JOTS by leaps and bounds. Thanks again!

Cheers,

Scott

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
great addition!

this was a great ending to chapter 12, i cant wait for the next one scott! i wish the wait isn't so long, as i have really come to enjoy your stories. here's to hoping that francis and nick make it to the end!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Sex, disagreements, and make-up sex

'Tis nice to know they can still get back together and confess their true and deep love for each other. They've fallen more deeply in love each time. Keep them loving. You've got a great story here!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Bonus part

I found your bonus part to this chapter on another site, why wasn't it published here? It was so hot!! https://scottsgaystories.tumblr.com/post/156602634714/jocks-of-the-south-nick-evans

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

if you take away the repeated same sex chapters this story would not be online , to much sex not enough plot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

The lie about Matt attending still makes absolutely no sense! Seems like it was artificial drama to separate Nick from Francis and set up the forced sex by Jackson in the bathroom. Not cool. These McCathy brothers/cousins can be real selfish dickish assholes - to the point of forcing rape. Why is that included? Plus it seems extreme that they would shred their wedding tuxes rather than simply remove them when they have to return to the reception. Stuff like that might seem hot in concept but it translates to just sloppy storytelling, IMO.

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