All Comments on 'Joe Tom'

I like the pace you've set. Your slow and deliberate style has only heightened the tension and increased my anticipation. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to losing a load when I read the next chapter!

Almost every one of your submissions could be a series. As usual you give us a very good sense of who your characters are. I am a southerner and the difference in the way life moves and feel there is spot on. I look forward to your next submission.

Peace and joy,

Shell

THIS IS A GREAT STORY I HOPE TO READ MORE REALLY SOON

that was hot and sultry... kind of like the weather down here lol! Another great story!

I love this story. Please don't stop now! I know it is not your normal style but, can we please have Joe Tom part 2?

I enjoyed it too but the part about sucking in the pubic hairs was just really gross. Almost as bad as licking cum off a dirty shower wall. Leave those details out please! The rest was great.

I got hot reading this ... hope there's more.

Great start :)

I just have to say, this is one of my most favorited stories here on Literotica! I hate to see a good story end, expressively between two people with such great chemistry.

*Cries*

Thank you so much for sharing such an amazing, heart touching story here with me and all the others who have stumbled a pond it.

i so love that the story is not at all harried, the author is sure of his characters and develops them into reality. errors are minimal if any (haven't detected any) and yes; i so love the story.

Man how awful can it be ?? Going to college and finding out you're in the middle of Orwell's 1984 ...

I'm dying to know what happens to these two!

Joe Tom sounds gorgeous ...

You must finish this story... I'm totally sitting at the edge of my seat!

What a brilliant read, had to keep letting myself to breathe and then the build up to ...... And ending please oh please

Baptists are bad, but not as bad as Protestants.

you are setting things up nicely. keep it going.

Great story, wonderful character development and such characters !! I am REALLY looking forward to more !!

DV19

Nice buildup of sexual tension along with great physical descriptions. Looking forward to reading more chapters!