All Comments on 'John and Erin'

But she doesn't seem to have any interest in having any other part of her body admired, touched, caressed, kissed, licked, etc. The effect on him could be most interesting, no less the effect on her.

Enjoyable, well written and realistic story. Thank you.

Really good. You should do another part where she puts him in a babydoll, does his hair and...for their private times, forces him into dressses, which he comes to accept since he's so underendowed. She enjoys him more as a girl than as a man.

If you don't like stories like this one don't read them and don't comment on them. Simple as that. Now fuck off...

Very hot and realistic, 5 all day!

Some women have realized the advantage of having a man with a little penis. It puts her in charge of relationship and guy will do anything to please her.

loved this story. I'd like to know what happens when they go out.

Thanks for the positive feedback everyone. Chapter 2 coming shortly!

Fantastic start.

Great first submission. A little more detail and maybe a little more build up needed but it was still a very enjoyable and erotic story.

I look forward to chapter 2 and more.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Realistic stories are always the best ones! Your writing is at a high level too, which is always a plus! I look forward to chapter 2...

How is this realistic? Or good writing, for that matter?

1 star.

Want to be him.

A man with pencil dick deserves panties.

Nice story of degrading bf. Only part remained is Creampie eating.

That will complete the degradation especially he wearing panties.

Interesting premise.

Why no playing with and edging his cock? "If you make me cum quickly with your tongur, maybe I'll play with it some more".

Three stars.

Good stuff .. a nice start. Im a fan of the SPH more than that feminization, but i like your style and the start of this

This is just incredibly stupid. If you can't get excited without something this twisted and ugly. There's really something wrong with you. Mentally, or an ugly evil heart perhaps...