All Comments on 'John Billionaire Ch. 01'

Amazing!! I cant wait for part two.

encore !

Excellent writing; entertaining, witty, and stimulating.

Only the first chapter and we are both enthralled. Can't wait for the rest!

This is great!

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really good stuff... normally a 7 page deal is dead or boring a short way in... yours was interesting and kept me going...

Welcome back to these pages. I just love the way you develope charecters. Please keep writing and don't be away for so long.

Good characters and still sexy.

Excellent work, bluedragonauthor.

Usually a story about the super-rich reads more like a soap opera or has characters you wouldn't want to know, but this is light and airy enough to be different. I actually find myself interested in what will happen to this lucky fellow.

The sex scenes are nicely done, too, and hot enough to make the long read more than worth it. Fact is, it doesn't seem like a long read at all.

And that's not easy.

very exicting

While reading this part I was half expecting there to be paparazzi taking illicit pictures of them and then messing up his date the next day...

bluedragonauthor, this story line is simply amazing. the characters had great personalities; you fleshed them out really well with your writing style. it's extremely refreshing to read great erotic stories that are well written, and flows so well. you should start writing romance novels, seriously. girls would love to read these types of stories too.

I know there are several fantasies about instant wealth. I liked that he wanted to stay the "same" after he had all of the money. The sex scenes were well written and very hot. Keep up the good work.

I loved it!

Fan fuckingtastic great start to what is promising to be a fantastic series. cant wait for more, and glad I don't need to.

Great story and I can't wait to read more chapters...

that was great. amazing story, amazing plot..WOW

Mate, the is nUthin' soft about the "Strayan" accent.

to see why ALL of BDA's stories are rated 4.5 or higher. Off to a very good start. Created clear images of the characters and virtually word perfect.

Really well written!! Loved it.

CONGRATULATIONS. Your mastery of the craft makes delightful reading. The only thing I might suggest is that you review the variations and nuances of the verb "to lie" and the verb "to lay" Also the female abdomen is the belly, not the stomach. These little mistakes detract from your otherwise impeccable prose. Thank you for sharing.

Can't wait to see where this goes.

Beautifully written, compelling, and erotic, cant believe I didnt read it sooner. Thanks.

Jonathan doesn't act like an investment banker. They aren't normal people. They're the smartest, from the best schools and rabid about their portfolios.

The first thing he would do is dive into his new holdings, and make a plan to double his wealth. He wouldn't go out and buy a big tv.

Also, his mother would now have the same security issues so she would either need to move into his place or somewhere comparable.

I know this is fiction and the goal is a lot of sex, but I think the characters have to remain true to the scenario.

Very good story!!! Every man's fantasy...

Very good story. I am confused about a few things that perhaps can get cleared up.. 1st, where was the group sex?? There was nightly sex, but never a group... not even a threesome.. And, how is it possible to want to say "I love you" before one date is even over. And when he was just considering letting the hot Maxim model move in with him 24 hours earlier?? I loved how the model still kept him around as a booty call until he got rich.. There's so many places the story can go if the hot bi-sexual model moves in!!

Great story- one of the best in Literotica! Great character description and evolvement and great sex scenes. MC will have his hands full what with Nicole and Taylor and Cassandra! Can’t wait to read on

Why doesn't it ever occur to him to be suspicious of Nicole? I mean, they've been living in the same buidling for a few years supposedly and they've never once spoken or even shared an elevator. Then suddenly he's in the news as the world's newest billionaire and just as suddenly she's in his hallway wanting to talk to him and sharing how 'similar' their early life situations were. That's just as suspicious as Taylor suddenly wanting to be hials girlfriend after keeping him sidelined for years but the thought never once occurs to him that her intentions are anything but pure? That doesn't make sense.