All Comments on 'John is Timeless Ch. 03: Hospital'

Okay, I am pickier about my SF. Each alien spawn cycle creates a new identical alien, apparently reproduction ready. Since our main character has made no attempts to actually kill the aliens, how can there possibly be any humans left acceptable for the aliens procreation, since the growth of their population is exponential. Even assuming a short lifespan, or the tapping of their population for as yet unknown purposes, the only acceptable prospects left alive could only be because they could not be physically reached. You are talking about a subjective time of a couple years. I suppose they could only be active when his non-frozen presence allows them to function, but how has he not figured this out in two years? He does appear to be selfish and stupid enough to never allow himself to do more than "heroically" impregnating all the pretty girls. He has gone two years without going beyond his chosen path. Bad science and an unsympathetic character, sad. Your command of writing is acceptable though, would be interested to see what else you might accomplish. AQ.

After three one page chapters, the same story in each... I wouldn't bother with any more.

Not much more to say really.