All Comments on 'John's Sex Encounters on the Job'

It's garbage writing best expample so bad I didn't waste reading past about a half page. There's so much use of .... that the story is lost and confusing. A full complete rewrite is necessary to remove and then proof read/spell check the story before resubmitting it.

I agree the other comment! This 'junk writing at best'! The story has potential, but needs a complete rewrite. The author needs to use Grammar Check and Spell Check before submitting this story again!

I thought it was great, fuck the other reviewers !!

Hey, thanks for your comment. This is the first time I have written anything in a story form and hope to explore different ways of writing.

When I was writing this story I was really doing it thinking aloud, I mean we don't always talk in proper grammar , do we?

I am also glad that the "guy", I assume, from Denmark like it. I am still working on a couple of stories written in a different form, and yes, I have intention to write with less "........".

Keep the comments coming, good or bad.

This story definitely had some fantasy in it. I've been in Sales for 40 years with a lot of good-looking women to work with, and I've never seen a sales proposal that went like this one.