by bubkent
Great story! Why didn't you ever do a part 2? Would love see where this goes!
Really? That sounds kind of uncomfortable, swimming with all the dirt and concrete on top of the pool. Did you mean inground swimming pool?
horrible beginning, horrible middle, and horrible ending. Please delete this story so no one else has to suffer what i suffered..
It is always good to know a little about the subject you are including in your writing. If you are going to add high school wrestling into your story at least have a semi working knowledge of that sport.
Sorry but not only was it unbelievable, it was boring. "She noticed how he was really feeling about her>"? What, she can read body language but she can't notice the difference between her future husband and his brother? Please.