All Comments on 'Jolene's Problem'

This story is so fucking hot. You should really keep this story going

Thank you for reading my story .

Let's see first how this one goes .

This is most definitely NOT a work of fiction.

It is too well-written, too detailed to have been pulled out of thin air.

The feelings and emotions and sensations are very real.

My only guess - having gone through something quite similar a few years ago - is that this story is autobiographical.

It certainly has all the markings of a deep, passionate and loving relationship that is still so very fresh and warm in your heart and mind.

Perfect story, re-told exquisitely!

Adriana

Thank you all for the feedback .

Please don't forget to rate it !

For a first Time Story this was really Awesome. I shall be marking you into my favourites and look forward to reading more of your story's in the future.

The plot was absurd, but well written. The premise was good, but a sex contest? Really?

If you spend some time slowly re reading the story, you'll find the necessary corrections. In the beginning you went from Janice, to Janet, then back again. At the end, I'm a little confused as to how the soon went from getting stood up at the alter to getting back with a former girlfriend, then,4 months later is married too her. But it was kind hot at times.

For you first story I think you did a great job. can't wait until you next one

Dear readers , thank you all for the feedback and the mails . Your opinions of the story and your remarks are very important , what you like , what you don't , that makes a new writer like me to improve and write something better next time .

Loved the themes of dominance and pseudo consent/non-consent, and the late inclusion of breastfeeding being the thing that finally got Jolene fucked when she was trying to protect her son, that was just ironic and hot!

Non-consent is pretty unarousing to me personally, but this managed to walk the line perfectly.

I don't want a sequel, but I would love to see more stories involving similar themes.

Very hot stuff!

Wow, this story is right down my ally.

This is a great sexfight, plus it has

big busty cougar milfs too.

Please Wonderer4 keep writing this

theme of stories.

Loved the entire story from concept to finished product. Spellbound by every word and situation. LOVED the lactation!

Awesom,what I like about this story is that the sexfight is about something really important not just the old cliché like fight over a man or cheerleader squad.it's real something that has a chance to happen not something out of sky.anyway it's great keep continue but put more effort in fighting scene,it's good but with more details in erotic part it will be great

I must agree with the last comment.

A sex fight between two mlf's is a whole

lot more personal than say, a catfight is.

More attention before, during and after

a sex fight like this story has to me is

important to make it hot, hot and hot.

I hope Wonderer4 writes another part

to this story, or some thing like it.

Thanks again Wonderer4.

I always wanted to try scisorring with another girl. There's this girl who use to be in my english class that I just wanted to dominate and God I still want her to this day. It could never happen because she's straight and two I don't she likes me that much not even as a friend. I really enjoyed this

My absolute new favorite story. Hottest scenario and your milfs have it all. the lactation almost made me cum. I really cannot wait for the next chapter. Please let there be a next chapter!

Another part to this story would be great.

What happens when Jolene comes home.

Will she get along with her sons new mother - in law?

Lets hope not.

Awsome !! Very hot, very good. Well written with an interesting plot !!

Hi !

I am a voracious reader in general and an even more voracious reader of erotica.I am a straight male who enjoys BG,GG erotica equally. My second fetish is that of the sexfight,Tribfight genre starring strong,intelligent,passionate women and i also love to read about mixed BG sexfights too. Plot, tension, sensitive buildups ,intense sexual competitive sexfights with lots of tribbing make my day and this story did not disappoint at all. In an alternative universe i would have loved to see jolene compete once again with other women and men in intense competitive sexfights.It was sd to see someone comment " a sexual contest ? really? You do not get how hot and exciting this genre is and its not at all misogynistic at all. Its liberating to see sexual

competition in an world where passion is very much needed.

Why do all the good writers stop writing ? Please continue to write more in this genre.

Cheers

I have seen plenty of sexfight/trib videos. When I read the description I had my doubts. This story is now top 3 on my all time list. The description of the sexfights leapt off the pages straight into the most inner thoughts of my mind - creating some of the best sex scenes ever.

Whoever you are and wherever you are thank you for creating this MASTERPIECE!

Excellent work, you could have started a new literotica category here!