All Comments on 'Jon Starting Over Ch. 04'

To everyone who comments... Its a rich reward and one that I appreciate greatly :) OOOh! I'm also searching for a grammar and spelling editor, so if you're interested, I'd love you to message me and we can talk and maybe team up... Much love, Billy.

I check the list every day to see if the next installment has been posted. Thank you for making my day this morning. I'm glad you will be posting quicker in the next few weeks. Keep on writing....

Fantastic. I'm really enjoying this series and especially love the realistic characters. I can't wait to read coming installments and am so glad that you'll have more time to write over the summer :) Good luck finding an editor, too.

except you Billy are an amazing writer in my eyes. Your writing and this story, the characters, everything have just blown me out of the water. Been a long time since I've read a story that I could actually *see* like a movie in my head. Just unreal. Thank you for sharing your gift. :)

..and still completely captivating. You're a great story teller, I cant wait for the next installment!

Billy, you're keeping me up past my bedtime! But HOW was I supposed to go to sleep when i knew Ch.04 was up? And you certainly didn't disappoint! I really feel Jon's pain! Can't wait can't wait can't wait for chapter 5! (and hope the last exams go well!)

xo

I cannot wait to read more of these two. I absolutely am in love with these characters. I do hope that Jon resolves his past and embraces the future.

X.

I've been browsing and enjoying much of the content on here for a while, and I appreciate soo much the connection, sensual romance,

and development Between Jon and Jasper...so much that I had to

join as a member! Looove it!! Couldn't miss the next chapter :) don't keep us

Waiting too long...

Thanks!!

AFemalefan

xo

I loved it!!! I'm so happy you're back, can't wait for the next chapter

I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Great job!

please post the next chapter soon, this is such a wonderful story!

We're still waiting for more!! PLEASE!?

i'vee just read the whole thing over and it may be even better than i remember...but please can wwe have some more?! Pretty please?!

I need more please! I have reread this story a couple of times. It's better each time and I love it more and more. Anxiously waiting on the next chapter(s)!! Can't wait. Patience is not one of my better qualities.

Lots of shit has gone down in my life lately (or rather for the past few months), and the story has been put on the back burner.

I promise to get back to it ASAP, cross my heart.

-Billy

I love this story...the character development of Jon and Jasper is great...I can't wait to read the next installment!

just read the story for the third time.......need more......

This has been one of the most enjoyable reads that I've had the pleasure to come across on lit. Blieve me I know how crazy busy life can get, I do hope though that when you get the chance to write, you'll do more with this story. It's very sweet and your characters are so realistic. I truely loving this story. Keep up the good work.

~EnchantedGreen~

this has been a enjoyable read. plz continue cant wait for it to be finished

Hate that you never finished it.

What happened to this story?? I'm dying to hear the rest of it.

sad thing that it ws never finishd...woulc hav made a good story....

Pleaseee finish this story! it's absolutely my most favorite one i've read thus far, and would be a shame if you never finish it.. Hopefully everything is okay with you and you just haven't had time to finish.. I believe, with your writing style that you could definitely publish a best selling book/novel with the way you bring your characters to life, I can picture every little thing happening in my head as I read..

OK, where's the next chapter?

What is it with these unfinished stories! :(

This is one of the best stories I've read on here! It would be good if you could carry on!

I know this is contrary to what most have said, but do take your time. Many people don't realize how big a "shift" can be. It varies from person to person, as does the length of time to recover and readjust to life after such an event.

When you're good and ready, I sincerely hope that you'll continue to write stories and submit them here for others to enjoy. I know I have.

Be well,

A fan

Awesome story, I hope you plan to continue. It is very enjoyable and a good read. Kudos.

You're driving me crazy with your pronoun switches! Several times you referred to Jon as "she." It's really annoying! Also, I'm guessing you didn't know, but traditionally "blonde" refers to a female and "blond" to a male. You've been using "blonde" the whole time for Jon. Aside from those things, I love the story so far.

Your grammer is a little off, but other than that it is a really good story. I hope you write more soon and can't wait so see how the story progresses. <3

ANY MORE.? PLEASE

I'm hooked and a SUCKER for romance.... not that lucky at romance...

Deamon Child...

my seal, the eclipse....

Have enjoyed this story and you did say 12 chapters hope you are able to finish this as it has developed into a wonderful story

So, fess up - you're still with us just not posting. Put us out of our misery

This is such a good read, Really good! Would love for you to continue the series.

It's such a sweet story please continue

My god, I see Dinkyboots asked you for more - that's the first positive comment I've ever seen him make.

So, im back again having just read your story through. Even uncompleted its still my favourite lit story. Please please please if you're still on the site consider posting some more chapters.... :D

Love the story, the characters, the fly-on-the-wall-filling - that I was there in the kitchen with them. Really wonderful pacing to the story. I would so much like to spend a little more time with these folks!

This story is one of the best on this site, even though only 5 of 12 chapters have been posted. Please, Bill, come back to us! We NEEEEEEEED the rest of this story! :-)

another story not finished.

a shame as this is fantastic

More of the story please!

and again: This should be finished

Great story and I love the characters. Please finish the story, it deserves to be completed.

I found your first chapter of this story in the random list. Nothing random about it!

A great story which desperately needs a final chapter or two.... Any chance of some closure for Jon and Jasper? Thank you Subdued.

I guess that this is the end? Well, it was great while it lasted...

Please write more! I love this story. The characters are so endearing as is the dialogue

A wonderful story! I would love to read how this story finishes. Even after I realized there wasn't a conclusion, I couldn't help myself from still reading the remaining chapters because your writing is so superb! I am in love with Jon and Jasper!