All Comments on 'Josephine'

by crowdedmind

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

'Marc was hitted bi' should be 'Marc was hit by'

The non-standard dialog marker makes it more difficult to read than it needs to be.

SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesabout 11 years ago
Did you write this garbage on your cell-phone?

Is that why you can't use quotation marks with the dialog, or are you just that retarded? And shouldn't your piece of crap phone have a spell-check? You should have used it.

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