All Comments on 'Josie - Gives a Personal Display'

Thank you. I enjoyed this brief story very much. Look forward to more of Josie's adventures.

Thoroughly enjoyed this(albeit too brief) story. You describe the release of Josie's shit quite beautifully( if that's not an oxymoron!) Please let's have some more.

Don't like this type of action, not for me.

There was nothing hot or stimulating here. The story was at best incomplete. There was no interaction among the participants, so there was no sexual - or even slightly sensual - in the entire scope of this story. It was kind of like it was a first-time effort for the author, who was too intimidated by nervousness to launch into a real story. Try again, and be more descriptive of what's expected, and just get with some explicit action...and let the reader experience what happens in the room...WITH the two 'stars' remaining to participate. Get nasty, as is expected in scat-oriented prose.