All Comments on 'Journey of Submission'

This was a extremely well-written story and, as a first submission, a quite outstanding piece of erotic fiction, well worth the five stars I have awarded it.

You are a fine writer, msterrilynn; we are lucky to have you writing for us.

Thank you - I look forward to reading much more of your work in the future.

More thought provoking then most of whats on here. And I loved it. I've honestly thought that a school/training program like that would be an interesting idea. Great writing. Can't wait to read more. :)

It was well written but seriously? For a porn site there was no sex for four pages. Even the punishments weren't sexual. Not even a butt plug during the horse play. Kinda dissapointing honestly.