by Scott4harmlessfun
Janice has unimaginable orgasms. But earlier you said her orgasms were very, very rare.
Which is it?
And no orgasm is unimaginable, they are a simple biological result of stimulation. They feel fantastic but it is just physiology.
Befsuse i had to reread thr first par5 again to remember the particulars.
Part II worth waiting for. Extremely arousing. Foreplay for literate couples!
to take this Journey to its logical conclusion.
Thanks.
....learn your spelling and grammar, and try speaking the dialog you write. If it doesn't sound natural as you say, it, it won't sound natural when your characters say it.
Starting on a slippery slope, loosing respect for each other, the wife will want to keep on with her new lifestyle, hubby will become yet another wimp.
Part 2 still in firm ground...The couple still haven't lose the control of their adventure. That was what they had in mind in their fantasies. The question is: Is this going to stay under control? Or will they lose control and with that lose their happy marriage? The frontier between losing or not losing is very thin...3* for now