All Comments on 'Journey to Submission'

For many of us sissies, it is more about the submission than the sex, and your story exemplifies that emotion very well.

Can't wait for more!

for the great cum

This story has potential, however with the poor sentence structure and spelling,

I couldn't get into it. I highly suggest using an editor for your next story.

This could be a really good story - I like what you've done with it. But it is so flawed with it's its, your/you're problems, and missing words, and poor punctuation, that it is almost unreadable.

Every writer needs an editor. Let someone help you. I'd be happy to if you want.

DonaldElliott11atyahoodotcom

As a sissy that serves as a personal cum slut to the guys in my neighborhood, I loved your story. there is nothing more sexy to me than being dominated by a real man ; ) You got it just right with Tony.