All Comments on 'Judy & Her Daughter Amy Ch. 02'

by OneHornyGuy

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thekiwicharmerthekiwicharmeralmost 20 years ago
Ron How Could You?

Your story is very good until the last sentence, which doesn't explain it's self clearly.

OneHornyGuyOneHornyGuyalmost 20 years agoAuthor
From the Author

To thekiwicharmer: That is clear from Chapter 1.

jimd51jimd51almost 20 years ago
Really cool

Very good, with a good twist.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
poorly done.

What can I say. Poor grammar, poorly written, and totally unrealistic. not exciting, just rather boring.

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