All Comments on 'Judy Gives into Her Desires Ch. 01'

Hard to know if the husband is happy, mad or really don't care if his wife fucks everyone on her way.

cuck shit.

I, onthereb wrote this, "Judy And I Tied The Knot" on 4-22-15. It was one of the first stories I wrote and was poorly written. My friend Relyt2 asked me if it would be alright for him to rewrite the story and make a few corrections. I gave Relyt2 my permission to also re write my Judy series, which was written over a year ago. He changed the name to this story to, "Judy Gives Into Her Desires." So give him HELL!!!!

and tough to get my mind around this one.

Why go all the trouble of getting married then okay to share wife even during honeymoon? Better just lived in with friends benefit!

If anyone has ever been in a 3some (or more), you know nothing beats the feeling. You don't have to be a wimp.

He had the perfect situation for annulment, why divorce, just leave her there. And IR fetish, isn't LW. 1*

Just awful. Regret reading it. Another misplaced effort in LW category. And to

think this is a rewrite. Mega yikes!! So poorly written. Please get some help since it looks as if there will be more chapters.

Hands down, much cheaper in th he long run... Just like never getting engaged would have been... The blind chasing the blind

that people like this author live, ugh.

SoI"ll give this story a 5 to help offset this fool's 1 vote which I'm sure he gave it.

gave it a 5 to help !!

Why didnt hubby just fuck the monster cuz he sure is a pussy

Why waste your time marrying a slut like her. Oh, I forgot. You're a pussy. 1*

The airlines have a tag on your bag that they match. In case the tag gets ripped off one bag, the other bags have tags and by process of elimination they know which bag is yours. Failing that, they bring the bags to you for you to identify. Been there, done that. So there's no way he has to go to the airport. The rest of this garbage was just ludicrous. Awful story. 1 star

Not even sure why they married or why he didn't leave her there after she left to fuck again

She is a fucking slut. To do that on her Honeymoon, dump her man move on, she will cheat on you from now till the end of time. She has real deep feelings for her husband - can't you tell.

graced us with her presence. Whoopee, the whore of Lit showed up again to hand out five star ratings. Well, let's get rid of that five, shall we? 1* to offset her score because this story sucked big time. Waste of space. Try writing erotica, it will be received better.

now call your black female friend down to get some white dick. either she fucks me also all night. Or we fucking divorce and I will spend every dime we have buying pussy

....and nothing to the story, but newlywed wifey's fucking a giant black cock. After all that and a sweet black pussy, why would she ever bother to go back to hubby? Clearly, he has nothing she wants and she married him as a convenience or as a free ride to 3 squares, clothes and a bed to sleep in.

So...what was your point? Her last line before the rather pointless and abrupt end was probably her best advice....option A, get divorced.

Oh, and please learn your rules for f grammar and how to spell.

The point of 1st person is to know the character's thoughts and feelings. However, this is yet another amateurish attempt at it where that is only technically accurate. Yeah, those technically are his thoughts and feelings, but they are as dispassionate and removed as a 3rd person narrator. He's not turned on, he's not turned off, he's not angry, he's not sad. He's nothing.

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And, as a result, so is your "story." Nothing.

You're a very lucky girl. Your new husband is primed, bring on a couple black lovers to help him be a good husband. A black girlfriend won't hurt either, just make sure husband is part of the fun. Xoxoxo Annette

this one sucks

I realize that this is just a story but it is very similar to something that actually happened to me. It happened several years ago when my wife and I were in our twenties. We were on a second honeymoon at a very nice resort. We were having a drink in the hotel bar when a nice looking man named Bill, about 35, started talking to us. I'm sure it wasn't me he was interested in, it was my wife, Carol, who is a very attractive slim blonde with a great body. The three of us eventually moved to a table. He danced with Carol several times and was pretty obvious about trying to feel her up. I'm not the jealous type and she can handle herself so I just ignored it. He was a nice guy and we were enjoying his company. Since my luggage had been lost, I had to go claim it at the airport. I had no problem leaving my wife with Bill since she had always been faithful and I trusted her completely. I was only gone for an hour but when I got back she wasn't in the bar. Our room was actually a small bungalow that looked out over the ocean. The moon over the water looked so awesome that, instead of going in the front door, I went around to the back to get a better view. I was about to knock on the sliding glass door for Carol to let me in when I looked through the large gap in the drapes and got the shock of my life. Carol, wearing only a pair of light blue panties, was down on her knees sucking Bill's cock! I was absolutely frozen, I couldn't move. It was the most erotic thing I had ever seen. Although I was furious, I had a giant hard on and wanted to see what would happen. He had a nice size cock which was stuffed in my wife's mouth. He said, "Suck on that big dick you fucking slut. I bet your husband doesn't come close to this." He looked really disappointed when she told him that my dick was actually larger than his. After he came in her mouth, he told her to get on the bed. He then made her suck him again until he was hard and then he proceeded to fuck her. After he was finished, he wanted to fuck her again but she told that he had to leave before I got back. I waited about 20 minutes before I pretended I had just gotten back. I was pissed off at her but could hardly wait to fuck her. I fucked her 4 times that night and had her blow me in the shower in the morning. I didn't tell her I had seen her fucking until we got home. She was very apologetic and said that she had never done anything like that in her life and didn't know what came over her. She said Bill had finger fucked her on the dance floor and she had taken out his cock under the table. What I had seen was the second time she had blown him. Since that night, we have had some fabulous sex with her describing her fucking and sucking with Bill.

What makes you think that my story is not true?

I have to give it 5* to offset the cuckold haters a bit. They should try to get a life but since they have tiny dicks they won't succeed.

The worst story on this site!!! You are a sick mind!!!

What makes us think this isn't true? Cartoon characters in cartoon situations. How's that?