All Comments on 'Julia'

I think that you can combine the two things It would spice things up.

I never felt that 'spice' was needed in this beautifully told story. Your educated use of the language beautifully exposed the presence and purpose of these glorious characters.

You presented to us the trials and tribulations of two people who did not know how to overcome their true feelings of one for the other and I hung on every word. Indeed, I felt that you had included the sexual occurrence purely because that is the anticipated purpose of this site because of the site. It was lovely, hell, it is why I read and publish here, but for the first time in my experience, I was hoping that this would prove to be a purely asexual prelude to the next chapter of their lives.

Via the use of emotional undertone you had already brought us to a point of sensual excitement purely by the expression of their internal feelings. In this installment, I would have been happy to stop there.

This being said, YES, I long for this story to continue to a new chapter, a chapter where their sexuality comes to the fore in the magical exploration of each others body and the ultimate experience of sexual completion.

It is a great piece of work You write so beautifully, please, go on!

well written, and a big tease to your readers wanting more :)

would love to see you explore the kink side , I find that path to be truly exciting lol

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Lovely story.

Xxxx

Emily

good to read something without pages of just raw sex.

A great story, I hope you keep it romantic and steamy;)

Thank you

L

I like the storyline and I am looking forward to more.

What started as a female enjoying.the freedom of being clothes free and having the sun on her naked body she meets up with a former student who strips naked to enjoy the sun with her. The student tentacles her about lesbian sex

Extremely sexy story

What about sex in the classroom late at night

Sex on the patio or even in the hot tub

Taking. photos of each other and getting so turned on with posing in various items of clothing that they have to pleasure one another.o

Keep it romantic and sexy

Julia is a truly sensuous story, erotic and tender. I'm not sure, though, whether there is enough to it to make a novel---it seems to have wrapped up enough in this short story. Expand it too far and you might risk losing the beauty of it. Just a thought.

This is a word vfor word copy of another author's work.

Please, expand this story and make it very detailed with kinky elements. It'll be marvelous since what you have written is magnificent! The story is abrupt, we are told about sex, but in reality we don't see this sex: just general hints.