by gapster7
Great build up, realistic, and well written. The mental picture of the revelation of the sexy woman was a super turn on.
You are truly a master of the written word. Best written story I've seen on here in a long time! Thank you!
Yet another seductive, steamy, intense, totally absorbing piece from one of Lit's most amazingly gifted authors. I'm going to have a secret smile on my face for the rest of the day, and be back to read this again -- often.
You nailed it again with an erotic story. I thoroughly enjoyed this story with its seductive build up and realism. Maybe there will be a sequel. Good work
Just Perfect! The build up, the bonding, and then the most erotic read in a while, outstanding work!!
I really liked the story because it was tastefully written and seemed very realistic. I love how you portrayed an intelligent woman who can also be sooo sexy when she is ready to show somebody. Hotness!!